Poem..."Zydrunas Ilgauskas (a.k.a. "Z") ", what do you think?

Honestly I think the poem is a decent eulogy to Z (I won't begin to attempt his name). You use a unique voice and style. I personally have little interest in the subject so the poem didn't move me imparticular, but for those sports fans, especially Cleveland Z fans, the poem should find appeal. And hey, you certainly aren't going to piss off any 7 Foot allstar from Lithuania happening to play for Cleveland with this poem of adoration. Also, in a wider little deeper context, if in years to come this poem is discovered, you'll be telling the future of the great admiration our generation has for professional athletes.